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WRITING A REVIEW: sample with teacher's feedback


Writing Class: Review
How good are you at the Writing paper? Do you have difficulty thinking of what to say? Do you pay enough attention to organisation? Do you often make silly grammar or spelling mistakes? Or do you think your writing is of a pretty high standard? Below you'll find authentic answers to some of the tasks that have appeared in Flo-Joe's Writing Class. Have a look and see how they compare to your own work.: Writing Class - Makeovers 




HOMEWORK. Writing a book review (ANSWERS)

Exercise 2:
1. P
2. N
3. P
4. P
5. N
6. N
7. P
8. N
9. N
10. P
11. N
12. N

Exercise 4:
1. heroine
2. childhood
3. internal
4. unfold
5. protagonists
6. cope
7. moved
8. appeal
9. indifferent
10. narration

HOMEWORK. Writing a film review (ANSWERS)

Exercise 2
a) A film I've enjoyed
b) What made me want to see it
c) It was directed
d) it starts
e) is set
f) The problem is that
g) played by
h) Eventually
i) Things get really complicated
j) all ends happily
k) there are a number of things
l) The soundtrack
m) I would recommend this film


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